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Paladine
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Will you carry me
I ask
'Till I stand?
You are heavy
He says
But I can.

So he carries me
And I stand
And we embrace

I'm sorry
I say
His blood on my nails
His body gone limp
In my wooden arms

I love you
We say
And he's gone
Thank you

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Paladine
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I'm not usually much for creative writing (as you can probably tell), so criticism welcome. Not sure if I said what I wanted to.
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nice
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